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    Mimis story

    As I walked towards the subway I noticed something strange. A brick wall had been built across the entrance. I walked towards it and suddenly found I was the other side of it. I had just walked through a solid brick wall!
    But that was not what was bothering me it was more the cold evil feeling that seemed to surround me like a damp thick fog. I needed to get away from here so I turned around and walked back the way I came. Back through a solid brick wall.
    The next day I walked pass the subway again the wall was still there but now a few bricks missing and the very same feeling of evil was to be felt all around but with it came the feeling of despair.
    I decided to go home where it would be far more warm and comforting. I unlocked the front door hung the keys up, took off my coat and shoes and opened the kitchen door only to find that across the width of my kitchen someone or something had built a brick wall which stood from floor to ceiling in solid ( but I could walk through it)



    That's' as far as I have got with this.
    Last edited by Plantaholic; 14-12-2015, 04:15 PM. Reason: Couldn't resist adding a bit to the story
    Bring me sunshine in your smile.

    #2
    Mimi - it's intriguing and I look forward to reading more. Was that a shiver down my spine? I think it was. Good luck!

    "Joy is what happens to us when we allow ourselves to recognise how good things really are. "

    (Marianne Williamson)

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      #3
      Creepy and amusing, can't wait for more Mimi
      What is life if full of care we have no time to stand and stare

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        #4
        Oh my goodness, scary!!!
        “A grandchild fills a space in your heart that you never knew was empty.” – Unknown

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          #5
          I wrote it a few years ago, it seemed to come to me when I was preoccupied with something else and that's as much as I have come up with. I wrote it on my PC and saved it.
          Who knows I might be inspired to add something to it.
          If anyone can add to it , feel free I would like to see where it 'goes' .
          Bring me sunshine in your smile.

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            #6
            Very intriguing Mimi.
            Sometimes I forget to like posts,but that doesn't mean I don't like them.

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              #7
              Ooooh, Mimi - lots of possibilities! Some kind of ghost story; Sci Fi; mental illness; hallucination; mind manipulation ..... it's not going to turn into a hearts and flowers, happy ever after romance, is it! I bet the next part of the story will come to you when you least expect it.
              "Joy is what happens to us when we allow ourselves to recognise how good things really are. "

              (Marianne Williamson)

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                #8
                I have a writer friend who loves to write stories with a supernatural twist, she would love to finish it I bet
                “A grandchild fills a space in your heart that you never knew was empty.” – Unknown

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                  #9
                  My lovely Goddaughter/niece is a children's author, and she's written some supernatural short stories aimed at 11-16 year olds. Our GSs love her stories and think it's really cool to have a cousin who's an author. It always amazes me where she gets her ideas from. 😀
                  "Joy is what happens to us when we allow ourselves to recognise how good things really are. "

                  (Marianne Williamson)

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                    #10
                    Oh I love this but first thing that came to my mind was dark depression hitting a brick wall but a creepy theme to it , you must write more , I find if a book doesn't grip me on the first page I'm not interested but this from the very start made me want to read more , so come on woman get your pen flowing 😊
                    Im not fat just 6ft too small

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